Nice story about Mr. G and how he got started in teaching. That was a really interesting start to his career. I'd never have known that he was expelled from high school. You'd never tell that now, seeing how he is with his students. You really missed a chance here to expand on that. Why did he get kicked out? What happened? Did he have bad experiences with his own teachers? I wanted to know more about why he was expelled. What did he learn from that experience now that he's a teacher? What would he say to a student who is in trouble like he was too? What advice would he give that student? You didn't expand on that and I think that was a golden moment that was missed. Other than that, I know nothing about his personal life or what he likes to do in his spare time. I'd love to know more about the Mr. G that we don't get to see. I see how he works with his kids here in school. They all respect him but I wanted to know more about what he does outside of school. Overall it was a good piece that was well done but I think we could have gone deeper. When someone throws you a golden coin like that you need to run with it! I really liked your VO where you talk about how he was inspired to teach. Great bridge to that point. Interview was a little blown out in color and his face is a little dark. Audio is good though. More sequences are needed and your closing VO is weak.
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.