STN is coming up and i'm going to talk about three things I would like to improve on. First I want to make my trailer more of random shots and not like a short film. I would also like to improve on my acting. In addition I would like to make a better story.
So one of the things Mr. M talked about was not making a short film but instead showing the exciting parts in a movie. We are allowed to start the trailer off with a story explaining the beginning in the movie. We showed the beginning of the movie as the beginning the trailer but then we showed some pranks that me and Kirra did to each other. Instead we should of made a story for a movie and then show the exciting parts in your story.
I have always had a passion for creating movies with my friends and acting in them. Although doing this was for fun so the acting and filming wasn't very good. Last STN video I had to do my very best to act good. Although looking back I did not do a very good job. Acting is a big thing that I need to work on.
Last STN practice we did not have a very good story. Our story was based around how I found a dollar and Kirra tried to take it. It Was not very realistic. I don't think someone would really care that much about a dollar. If it was a hundred dollar bill, well I could see that but our story was unbelievable.
In conclusion next STN practice i'm going to work on these things. First I'm going to make a movie trailer rather than a short film. Second I'm going to work on my acting. And third I'm going to work on our story.
My name is Erik I am currently in 6th grade. In my free time I like getting videos of waves, and putting them together to make edits. I also like taking pictures of waves.