Shots were done well, audio was pretty good but the background hiss on the shot of the rubbish by itself was noticeable. It was also a little weird that this piece of rubbish just fell from the sky. Does most rubbish end up like that on the beach? The boys didn't even think to look up at all to see where it came from? If it was there to begin with, I think that would have been more believable. A shot of them throwing away the rubbish would have been good too. Be careful on the titles as you cut off the sides and we can't see everything you wanted us to see. I also noticed the boys mentioned that they were the ones that surf in the ocean and it should be picked up, yet the rubbish is on the beach. I can't see any ocean in any shot so I don't know how far they are from it. If you couldn't get into the water (which is what I thought you were going to do) then at least have them say something to make that connection that if they don't pick it up, the rubbish could end up in the ocean and affect the marine life. 3.2 points
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