You guys are now looking in the right directions! Well done! This makes a huge difference in your video! Your topic is a good one and your message is pretty clear. Your shots are pretty well done and your audio is good. The one thing that needs to be improved is the pronunciation of some of the words that Dylan is saying. He's pronouncing some of them wrong. I don't even know what word he's saying for the second ingredient. He should be saying "flame retardant" not "flame reterrant." Your last VO also needs to sound more alive. 3.6 points
.My name is Erik I am currently in 6th grade. In my free time I like getting videos of waves, and putting them together to make edits. I also like taking pictures of waves.