This is pretty good but could be way better. Have your soda stand look more like a lemonade stand where we see what's for sale and the price. Use a tablecloth or cardboard to wrap around the table and then bring the items from under the table when you make them. Having them out on the table to see right away doesn't work. Make your sign say "Fresh Soda" and then pulling out the ingredients makes sense. It's like you're making him a fresh soda from scratch right there. Don't forget the sugar! Also be careful to keep you on one side and your customer on the other. Right now it starts that way but then the angle you're filming your parts have you looking the same way as he does. He has to be looking to the right and you have to be looking to the left.
.My name is Erik I am currently in 6th grade. In my free time I like getting videos of waves, and putting them together to make edits. I also like taking pictures of waves.