This is better but not by much. I asked you both to look for more evidence to back up your points. I do see a few that were added but this still lacks more "beef" to this sandwich we call a story. You still don't mention what they did to restore the heiau up to this point. You added that one sound bite where they used to have fruit trees but replaced them with natives, but that's it. Was there nothing else that they said about the work they did? I also want to know more about this group. How did they start? Are the same people there now as when it first began? How many people are we talking about? I also want to know what their future plans are.
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.