As we talked about this in class, your 5 points are good and are in a logical sequence. Your opening sound bite is terrific. Well chosen! Your VOs are well done too where you also give me information that wasn't share in a sound bite, like how long the restoration process has lasted. However what this lacks is evidence. Your points aren't fully supported by enough evidence. You gloss over them with just one sound bite that isn't enough. Let's work on this some more and put more beef into this sandwich! 2.5 points
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