Overall, this is a much, much, better video compared to your first quarter project. Technically it's very sound. You have mostly solid b-roll shots (maybe one or two shots I noticed some shakiness), your lighting is good, your audio is good (although it's not level) and this was done on time. It is evident that you both worked much harder on this and it showed! Great job! There are some things however that I feel could be improved. As I mentioned with the audio, your levels are all over the place. Some interviews are soft, VOs are louder, and you can just hear the change in how loud or soft the clips are from one to another. They need to be level. When you think you are done editing, next time play your story back but close your eyes and just focus on the sounds you hear. When you do this and solely concentrate on what you hear and nothing else, you will easily hear the difference. All of your sound bites, from interviews to VOs should be at the same level. As for your interviews, Melissa's interview is just off to the side too much. We see too much of the side of her face and it's close to being a profile shot. She should be slightly turned, looking just off camera at your reporter. In Johnny's interview, you cut down the volume of his last line and roll it into the next clip without much space. You can hear that something is off in his last sentence. Give your clips some room to breathe by putting some space between the speaking of two different clips. The wording of your VOs need some work too as the way you are using some of your words in your sentences doesn't match. It sounds weird actually. "With over 15 farmers markets throughout the island, big and small are changing the way we purchase food." This sentence doesn't make sense. Big and small aren't changing the way we purchase food, farmers markets are. The corrections that need to be made are easy to do so overall, this is a pretty good story. I'm glad you both put in the time to make some improvements as this is way better than your first quarter video. This is a 3.7 or an A-. Nice job!
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